1st pic) You used the one-thrid rule and made the scenery look very nice. However, the picture could be even nicer if Norul was looking in your direction. 2nd pic) You have leading lines and again the one-thrid rule. However, there are some distractions in the background. 3rd pic) The picture contains leading lines but it looks "messy". 4th pic) You used the golden rule in this picture. But, you could have used the one-thrid rule because the space behind her is bare.
1st photo: The lightings were good and the one third rule was applied. The photo could be improved if the girl in the photo looks in your direction. 2nd photo: The lightings of this photo was good but the diagonal rule was not applied hence, the photo does not show any depth. The photo could be improved if you use the diagonal rule and zoom into the picture. 3rd photo: The diagonal rule was applied. The lightings are not so good for this photo. It could be improved by adjusting the lightings and taking the photo when the light source is behind you. 4th photo: You have used the golden rule, but the one third rule was not applied. It could be improved by incorporating the one third rule and the golden rule.
For the 1st photo, the one third rule is used well. However, if your focus is the girl's action, will it be better if you can capture her face expression? Little details of the girl is shown in the photo. To me, the girl seems like a distraction in the photo.
From the caption for the second picture, your focus is on the bridge. Are the two girls captured in the photo distractions? You may want to capture how the bridge connect people together ( the moment when people walking on the link way from different direction ).
You seems like trying to use the diagonal rule for the third photo. You may want to adjust the angle when you take the photo. To me, it appears to be a bit "messy'.
For you fourth photo, i will suggest that you adjust your camera to applied the one third to the photo ( take more of the flat surface ).
1st pic) You used the one-thrid rule and made the scenery look very nice. However, the picture could be even nicer if Norul was looking in your direction.
ReplyDelete2nd pic) You have leading lines and again the one-thrid rule. However, there are some distractions in the background.
3rd pic) The picture contains leading lines but it looks "messy".
4th pic) You used the golden rule in this picture. But, you could have used the one-thrid rule because the space behind her is bare.
1st photo: The lightings were good and the one third rule was applied. The photo could be improved if the girl in the photo looks in your direction.
ReplyDelete2nd photo: The lightings of this photo was good but the diagonal rule was not applied hence, the photo does not show any depth. The photo could be improved if you use the diagonal rule and zoom into the picture.
3rd photo: The diagonal rule was applied. The lightings are not so good for this photo. It could be improved by adjusting the lightings and taking the photo when the light source is behind you.
4th photo: You have used the golden rule, but the one third rule was not applied. It could be improved by incorporating the one third rule and the golden rule.
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ReplyDeleteFor the 1st photo, the one third rule is used well. However, if your focus is the girl's action, will it be better if you can capture her face expression? Little details of the girl is shown in the photo. To me, the girl seems like a distraction in the photo.
ReplyDeleteFrom the caption for the second picture, your focus is on the bridge. Are the two girls captured in the photo distractions? You may want to capture how the bridge connect people together ( the moment when people walking on the link way from different direction ).
You seems like trying to use the diagonal rule for the third photo. You may want to adjust the angle when you take the photo. To me, it appears to be a bit "messy'.
For you fourth photo, i will suggest that you adjust your camera to applied the one third to the photo ( take more of the flat surface ).
Nice job!
Kimberly